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And She Was Ch. 1

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And She Was
Written by Closer-To-The-Sun (Joseph Noblit)
Chapter 1: In My Place

Applejack was trotting across her family's farm. The late afternoon sun was still beaming down warmth across Equestria and Ponyville was no exception. The orange mare trotted in the heat to the farthest reaches of the groves to find a familiar red stallion, her brother.

"Big Mac! Where in Celestia's name are ya?" Applejack shouted into the grove of trees.

Before Big Macintosh could reply, Applejack found him with the wagon attached and hurried up to him. The stallion's body looked tired despite it not reflecting on his face.

"Have ya been out here in all this heat, Big Mac?" Applejack asked, looking at his sweaty red coat.

"Eeyup," the stallion spoke his usual phrase.

His sister gave an displeased expression, "And what have ya been doin'? It's not even applebuckin' season fer 'nother two months."

"Well, Ah've been clearin' out the out the debris underneath the orchards in prep fer the upcomin' season," Big Mac explained.

"But ya don't have ta, Big Mac. We're in the down season right now."

"But-"

"But nothin'!" Applejack interrupted her brother, "Look, yer really workin' hard, and all of us appreciate it and all, but all of us think yer workin' too hard."

Big Mac raised an eyebrow, "Us?"

His sister answered, "Granny Smith, Applebloom, and mahself."

"Oh."

"So, that's why ah got somepony to help ya take a few days off," Applejack stated proudly.

"Got somepony?" Big Mac echoed, pondering what his sibling meant.

As if on cue, a pink earth pony appeared out of nowhere to near the Apple siblings, "Hiya~!" she spoke energetically.

Not phased by Pinkie Pie's sudden arrival, Applejack raised a hoof and pointed to the frizzled-mane mare, "Her."

Big Mac was still startled from the unbelievable and random appearance, "Oh, um, howdy Miss Pie…."

Pinkie Pie giggled and snorted, "Oh please, Miss Pie was my mommy! And my nana! I'm Miss Pinkamina Diana Pie, or just Pinkie Pie! And Applejack told me that I need to help you relax and not work so hard all the time!"

The stallion was still hesitant about the whole idea, "Ah'm really flattered that ya would be willing ta do such, but ya really don't have t-"

"Ah, hush up, Big Mac!" Applejack interrupted her brother again before turning her attention back to Pinkie, "You can continue, Pinkie Pie."

"Thanks! Now, I got so many super-duper plans for us to do that will help you unwind and have some fun!"

Applejack chimed in, "Ya do need to take some time off, Big Mac. You've been workin' harder than worker bee in a busy hive. So, Pinkie here is goin' to help, got it?"

"E-Eeyup…." The stallion finally agreed.

"Yay~! We'll start tomorrow, Big Mac! I'll see you bright and early!" Pinkie exclaimed happily before bouncing off back to Ponyville.

While the Apple siblings watched, Big Mac quietly asked himself a question aloud, "What did ah jus' agree ta?"

"Oh, hush, ya'll like it," Applejack jeered with a sly smirk.
“The world was moving and she was right there with it and she was/The world was moving she was floating above it and she was.” –Talking Heads, “And She Was”

Chapter 1: You are here : In My Place
Chapter 2: [link] : My Friend
Chapter 3: [link] : Little Bit
Chapter 4: [link] : Maps

Time for some PinkinTosh! Or is it MacinPie? How about Big Pink-intosh Pie? Whatever it is, it will be fun to write, that's all I know. Sit back and enjoy. Also, this work is for the contest being held by :iconpinkintosh-fans:, all four chapters, so look forward to that.

Title: And She Was
Chapter 1: In My Place
Premise: Big Mac is working himself too hard. Will Applejack's plan be what he needs, and for that matter, will he agree to it?


The title for this short story is taken from the song "And She Was" written by Talking Heads from the album 'Little Creatures'.
The name of this chapter is taken from the song "In My Place" by Coldplay, from the album 'A Rush Of Blood To The Head'.
All characters belong to My Little Pony (c) Hasbro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic was made for television by Lauren Faust :iconfyre-flye:
Written by :iconcloser-to-the-sun:
© 2012 - 2024 Closer-To-The-Sun
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