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Combat Baby Ch.1

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Combat Baby
Written by Closer-To-The-Sun (Joseph Noblit)
Chapter 1: She

Celestia's sun shined down on to the land of Equestria below. The light entered the window of Fluttershy's cottage, hitting an orange pegasus's face. The light caused her to wake up. With a yawn, Scootaloo got out of her bed and stretched her hooves and wings out. Looking at her wings, she flapped them slowly and sighed to herself, "Almost done with school and still can't fly. Way to suck, Scootaloo," she thought to herself as she made her way out into the living room of Fluttershy's home.

In the main room, Fluttershy was tending to one of the many animals that were taking residence in her home. "Oh, good morning, Scootaloo. Did you rest well?" the yellow pegasus asked.

"Yeah, I did. Thanks again for letting me live here during the week to attend school, makes things a whole lot easier for me," Scootaloo said, being careful to not trip over a family of sleeping rabbits.

"Oh, it's not a problem at all! I mean, you are my best friend's little sister and all. Of course, even if you weren't Rainbow Dash's sister I would be more than happy to have your company," Fluttershy spoke as she finished bandaging a squirrel.

"Well, still, thanks," Scootaloo said as she put her saddlebag on her back, "I should get going to meet with the others, see you later!" The purple maned pony was quickly out the door, on her scooter, and heading to the schoolhouse.

Along the way, she met up with her two best friends, Applebloom and Sweetie Belle. The three ponies, despite being almost done with their schooling, still have not gotten their cutie marks. While they didn't crazy and bizarre activities in hopes of gaining their marks, they still stuck by each other and remained close friends. Lately, however, Scootaloo had noticed something different about her two friends and it showed up again as they walked.

"Hey, girls," the pegasus said to her friends, "What's up?"

"Oh, hey there, Scootaloo," Sweetie Belle welcomed her friend, "I was just telling Applebloom here that I think the new colt is pretty cute!" The unicorn was blushing a little at her words.

"You mean Pip?" Scootaloo asked, raising an eyebrow in confusion.

"Yeah, that's him. Ah do have t' admit, he is cute with his accent an' all," Applebloom chimed in, "Ya should totally ask him out or somethin'".

"You think he will want to?"

"Ya have t' ask him!"

"I think I might do that today," Sweetie Belle thought to aloud.

Scootaloo was both bothered by the conversation itself and by the fact that her friends were talking about colts and having crushes on them. "Uh, guys? Maybe we should worry about that stuff after we get our cutie marks? We still get called blank flanks, you know."

Applebloom shrugged it off quite quickly, "But we'll get 'em when we get 'em, Scootaloo. Applejack and Big Mac keep tellin' that, so ah'm not worried."

"Neither am I," Sweetie Belle agreed with the earth pony, "besides, I think Applebloom is more worried about getting Snails to pay attention to her," the white unicorn gave a sly smile as she revealed Applebloom's secret.

"Hey! You promised not t' tell anypony!" Applebloom lightly pushed her friend, "How about ah tell Snips that you like him, huh?"

"Hey, no fair!"

"What's not fair about it? Ya just told Scootaloo about Snails!"

Scootaloo's mind drifted off as she moved on her scooter. She ignored the bickering and gossiping of her friends. In the pegasus's mind, she was really annoyed that her two friends were becoming like the fillies they hated when they still called themselves the Cutie Mark Crusaders; they were just like Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara. Taking a deep sigh, she turned around and scooted toward Ponyville.

"Scootaloo! Where are you going? School's this way," Sweetie Belle called out.

"I'm not going today," she replied.

"Why's that?" Applebloom asked, her head titled to one side.

"Just feel like playing hookey today, that's all," she simply stated.

"But what about-" Sweetie Belle started.

"Don't worry, I'll be back their tomorrow. No worries," Scootaloo said as she started the engine on her scooter and rode away. Her friends watched her ride away, giving a worried look.

Riding through town at a slightly slower speed than she would normally, Scootaloo began to let her mind wander, "I know I shouldn't ditch class today, but I just need to just get away from that girlish stuff that Sweetie Belle and Applebloom are talking about. I should be okay since Dash did this quite a lot when she was in school. Guh, but I just don't understand what's with the girls. I mean, what happened to our top priority being about getting our cutie marks? Now they just care about getting colts to notice them. What's the point? Seriously, what do I care if some guy likes me or not. And for that matter, I don't think being super girly is going to help. Guh, I can't stand girly stuff….

Lost in her own thought, Scootaloo didn't hear a terrified voice from above, "Look out below!"

With a loud thud, a purple and green dragon with small wings crashed into Scootaloo, knocking her off her scooter and causing the two to hit a tree. Rubbing his head as he recovered, the dragon looked toward Scootaloo and became deeply concerned, "Oh my gosh, are you alright, Scootaloo?"
“Are you locked up in a world that's been planned out for you?/Are you feeling like a social tool without a use?/Scream at me until my ears bleed/I'm taking heed in just for you.” –Green Day, “She”

Chapter 1: You are here - "She"
Chapter 2: [link] - "My Beloved Monster"
Chapter 3: [link] - "I Don't Like It Like This"
Chapter 4: [link] - "For What It's Worth"
Chapter 5: [link] - "Modern Romance"
Chapter 6: [link] - "My Own Worst Enemy"
Chapter 7: [link] - "Orange Sky"

And after over a week of promises, here is the first chapter of my new fanfic, 'Combat Baby'. Let me first tell you that I am taking a few liberties on this fanfic, and allow me to explain:

-The CMCs are older, about sixteen in human years, and still no cutie marks (and Scootaloo cannot fly still)
-Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash are sisters (this has not been confirmed nor denied in the series, so just getting that out there)
-Scootaloo is a tsundere type of character (personally, I honestly see her like that)
-Spike is older (I personally imagine him older than the CMCs since he was hatched when Twilight was a filly, so I say he's eighteen. Again, this is just me)
-Spike has just formed wings during a growth spurt about two months before the start of this story

Again, these are liberties I take when writing this fic, so please take it with a grain of salt. Please and thank you. So....Spikealoo....let's see where this goes, shall we?

EDITED: Fixed the errors (Dec. 22, 2011)

Title: Combat Baby
Chapter 1: She
Premise: Scootaloo feels out of place among her friends. Will playing hookey from school help her feel better?


This fanfic is dedicated to my friend :icondvzart:, hope ya feel better, mate.

The title for this short story is taken from the song "Combat Baby" by Metric, from the album 'Old World Underground, Where Are You Now?'.
The name of this chapter is taken from the song "She" by Green Day, from the album 'Dookie'.
All characters belong to My Little Pony (c) Hasbro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic was made for television by Lauren Faust :iconfyre-flye:
Written by :iconcloser-to-the-sun:
© 2011 - 2024 Closer-To-The-Sun
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Mr2awsom's avatar
you sir are an excellent writer. who all have you/will you ship spike with? youve already pared him with the entire cmc.