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Love Spreads
Written By Closer-To-The-Sun (Joseph Noblit)
Chapter 3: Just Like Honey

In the now vacant cottage, Spike looked at Fluttershy. The yellow pegasus already had one tear roll down her cheek. Her body was still trembling from Spike's shouting. It seemed as if she had something to say, but she was so shaken from the incident that even if she had the words, she would more than likely have more tears fall.

The dragon looked away from the mare, immediately regretting his action. With his scales on end, he spoke, "I-I….I'm sorry, F-Fluttershy…." Spike couldn't bear to look at Fluttershy, even for a moment, "I-I….didn't mean to yell at you…."

The yellow mare took a few deep breaths to calm herself down. After wiping a few tears from here eyes, she finally spoke, "It's okay, Spike."

Spike, still with his head turned, shook his head, "No….it's not….I had no right to burst out like that…." With a few blinks of his eyes, he alright had a couple tears in his own eyes, "I guess being treated as some kid finally just caught up with me…."

"So is that's why you have been working so hard lately?" Fluttershy asked. She didn't wait for an answer. Instead, she trotted towards the dragon, lightly hugging him.

The action from the mare startled Spike. While in her embrace, Spike's face burned red and his body uncontrollably shook.

Fluttershy continued, "While you are a small, cute little creature, you still have the heart of a dragon." She broke the hug from Spike and gave a warm smile to him. Her face was beaming, even with the recent tears from her eyes.

Her smile and words were sweet to Spike, like the sweetest honey. He couldn't help but blush the same shade of pink as her mane.

Seeing Spike's flustered expression, Fluttershy couldn't help but giggle and blush a bit herself. "You're very cute when you blush, Spike," she couldn't help but make the comment.

Spike tripped over his words. After a series of nonsensical words, phrases, and babbling, he seemed to just give up trying to justifying his embarrassed expression. With a sigh, he laughed at him own reaction to the mare's statement.

Smiling, Fluttershy finally said something that seemed to even surprise herself, "Well, how about we both go have a pleasant take a nap?"

"Huh? But I'm not tired."

"Neither am I."

END
“Sometimes it feels like a barricade/To keep us away, keep us away/It kind of does.” –Interpol, “Barricade”

Chapter 1: [link] : "Borrowed Time"
Chapter 2: [link] : "Barricade"
Chapter 3: You are here : "Just Like Honey"

Alright, I have to say this. I uploaded the last chapter at night, and then the next day, I went down to San Diego for a concert (talked about here). I was at the bar, waiting for the show. So I checked the comments, and I laughed so hard about all of the comments that were hating Spike for making Fluttershy cry. I found it so freaking funny. I'm sorry. xD Anyway, enjoy. (Also, I asked you all, and a good chunk of you wanted the 'saucy' ending, so deal with it!)

Title: Love Spreads
Chapter 3: Just Like Honey
Premise: Spike made Fluttershy cry. Will everything be okay?


The title for this short story is taken from the song "Love Spreads" by The Stone Roses, from the album 'Second Coming'.
The name of this chapter comes from the song "Just Like Honey" by The Jesus And Mary Chain from the album 'Psychocandy'.
All characters belong to My Little Pony (c) Hasbro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic was made for television by Lauren Faust :iconfyre-flye:
Written by :iconcloser-to-the-sun:
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Hawkbittern Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student General Artist
I really liked this story.
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Closer-To-The-Sun Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you like it.
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Hawkbittern Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student General Artist
If you don't continue this I will (that actually an empty threat as I takes me forever to write anything. But I would like to).

FlutterSpike is such a cute paring. I havto wonder why it hasn't taken off?
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Closer-To-The-Sun Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The impracticality of it is my guess. RainbowSpike, as odd as it sounds, seems to be more practical than Fluttershy and Spike. Though I do agree, it is pretty cute.

I have no plans as of now to continue it. I still have a number of fics to continue, along with finishing my BerryPierce fic and then get started on PinkieTosh, CaraSparkle, and another DoctorDerpy fic to finish the adventure series.
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Hawkbittern Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow, you sure do work on a lot of fics.

I don't feel practicality has much to do with shipping (All Discord shippings are impractical as he's in stone) Still you can never tell what will be popular. You'd think LunaShy would be big as those are two of most popular characters. but in truth few people ship them.
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TruthSender Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
Nice and short :3 Now I really hope for some CMC :)
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BoneSatellite Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
You're serious? that's it? Delightful, but ... short. And majorly lacking in payoff. You could combine all three chapters into a oneshot and it would still be short. And disappointing.
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Closer-To-The-Sun Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I apologize. I was never totally sure how to do this story. I'm sorry.
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BoneSatellite Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
If you finished it off with some clop, you could fix all that. :D
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Closer-To-The-Sun Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry, no clop from me! xD
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